Activity 5.3
Now, look at the notes in the sample plan below to help you write an introduction for the following task. Remember to use the three steps to guide you.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Childhood obesity is increasing at rapid rates in developed countries.
What are some of the causes of this problem? What are some ways in which
childhood obesity rates can be reduced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Introduction
Broad statement: Childhood obesity is rising all over the world ...
Thesis: Many causes and many ways to overcome ...
There are no 'right' or 'wrong' answers to this activity.
Preview
As nations become wealthier, starvation or hunger is less common and new challenges are
created. Childhood obesity is one such challenge and it has started to become a problem
all over the world, particularly in developed countries. There are many causes of obesity in
children; however, with action we have the ability to reduce the incidence of this childhood
problem.
TIP Don't copy the exact words from the task itself - use your own words!
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