Activity 5.5
Look again at the task on childhood obesity in Activity 5.3 and, using the ideas in the
plan below, write two body paragraphs for the task. Remember to start each of your
paragraphs with a topic sentence and then follow with supporting ideas and examples if possible. You could ask a teacher or classmate to check your answers for you.
Body Paragraph 1: Causes - too much fast food, too much time playing computer games,
not enough sport/exercise
Example ...
Body Paragraph 2: Ways to reduce - parents cook meals not buy takeaway, limit time on
computers, more sport at and after school
Example ...
Answer
Obesity in children may be caused by several factors, the most obvious being too much fast
food. Nowadays, parents often work long hours and are too busy to cook so they buy their
children takeaway food. This food is much higher in fat than home-cooked meals and as
a result youngsters put on weight. Another cause of childhood obesity is that children are
spending more time on computers and less time doing exercise than in the past. Children
used to come home from school and play outside; however, since computers have become
commonplace, they prefer to play computer games.
There are many ways to reduce the rate of childhood obesity. Firstly, parents should cook
more meals for their children, and if they have to eat at McDonalds, for example, they could
choose the healthier meals that are now on the menu. In addition, parents need to limit the
time that children are allowed to play on computers and they should enrol their children in
after-school sports or go together to a park and exercise.
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