Activity 6.1
Look at the following sentences and choose the academic word to help make the sentence better. Questions d and e require you to think of a more academic word.
The benefits/good points of working from home are many.
Continual use of/talking on mobile phones may cause cancer.
Traffic jams are common/abundant nowadays.
Old people/ have much to offer to both workers and society in general, and so/ they should keep/ working as long as possible.
Making/ young people (to) learn uncommon languages may lead to rebellion as young people usually fight/ against their mother and
father/
Avoiding informal vocabulary also helps make your essay better.In order to avoid using informal vocabulary, follow these simple rules:
Avoid contractions (use do not , not don't ).
Avoid question forms (use There are many advantages to working from home , not What are some of the advantages of working from home? ).
Write numbers in words if below one hundred, beginning a sentence, or rounded numbers (use eighty-five not 85 ).
Do not use abbreviations (use that is , not i.e. ).
Avoid slang words or phrases (use in my opinion , not I reckon ).
Avoid personalised language (use It is commonly thought that ... , not I think that ... ).
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