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Activity 5.8

Look again at the sample essay for the task on environmental problems printed in fu below. Underline the Linking words that have been used.
It is agreed that our environmental problems need to be solved; however, there is argument over who should solve them. Some people feel that only the government should be responsible for finding solutions to these issues, but the problems that exist are so large and, therefore, overcoming them requires joint efforts from government, as well as business and individuals.
Solving environmental problems is expensive and the financial burden on governments alone is too high. As businesses are often responsible for causing some of the environmental problems, they should help with the cost of solving the problems. This could be done by contributing funds or by implementing new systems to minimise further pollution.
A second reason that solving our environmental problems requires joint contribution is that action and effort are needed. The government can spend money on campaigns or introduce taxes; however, slowing or stopping the problems requires effort from all. If businesses do not stop polluting and individuals do not minimise their waste, no advertising campaign will be effective.
Admittedly, the government does have the power to make an enormous impact on the environment and without government intervention change would probably not happen. The introduction of the carbon tax in Australia is an example of government action helping solve environmental problems. However, without all parties contributing this change would not be effective.
In conclusion, the government does need to be the leader in solving our environmental problems, but it needs the financial assistance and the efforts of businesses and individuals to make any long-term, effective change to the problems that exist.

Answer

It is agreed that our environmental problems need to be solved; however, there is argument over who should solve them. Some people feel that only the government should be responsible for finding solutions to these issues, but the problems that exist are so large and, therefore, overcoming them requires joint efforts from government, as well as business and individuals.
Solving environmental problems is expensive and the financial burden on governments alone is too high. As businesses are often responsible for causing some of the environmental problems, they should help with the cost of solving the problems. This could be done by contributing funds or by implementing new systems to minimize further pollution.
A second reason that solving our environmental problems requires joint contribution is that action and effort are needed. The government can spend money on campaigns or introduce taxes; however, slowing or stopping the problems requires effort from all. If businesses do not stop polluting and individuals do not minimize their waste, no advertising campaign will be effective.
Admittedly, the government does have the power to make an enormous impact on the environment and without government intervention change would probably not happen. The introduction of the carbon tax in Australia is an example of government action helping solve environmental problems. However, without all parties contributing this change would not be effective.
In conclusion, the government does need to be the leader in solving our environmental problems, but it needs the financial assistance and the efforts of businesses and individuals to make any long-term, effective change to the problems that exist.


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