Change the bold words and use words from C in the vocabulary section to make it
sound more academic.
The present study was initially thought up in order to
validate a new method of enquiry by which genetic
information could be used to predict disease. The study
goes against the findings of Hill (2009); indeed it would
appear to show the opposite of what he claimed. It
presents a rather different view of the genetic factors
which cause disease. Despite this , the study does not
wipe out Hill’s, as his studies served the very important
purpose of devising symbols to stand for certain
tendencies, in this way facilitating further research.
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