It is also good to give specific examples for some of your points.

For example, 'Many celebrities have got into trouble after getting angry with reporters and photographers who were following them' could be added at* to support the first point in the student's second paragraph.

You wilI get more marks if you give specific examples to support your points. It can be something that happened to you or a friend, something you read or something that happens in your country. Make sure it provides evidence of the point you are making.

06. Where in the paragraph in exercise 5 could you add these sentences?

1. Even people like Bill Gates, who gives most of his money to charity, are criticised!

2. Many famous people have become ill due to overwork and always being in public view.

3. For example, everyone has seen pictures of Harper, the young daughter of David and Victoria Beckham.

07. Add specific support to these points. The person or situationcan be from your own country.

Famous people are often rich.

You might have a lot of fans.

You will be able to use your fame and money to help others.

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